Peer Comment 2

Hi Ricardo

I look at your Electronic music entry blog, and it looks you did a pretty good job explaining about Kraftwerk trajectory, but a advice i can give you, is to be more specific about what are you talking and give more details about the topic.

You should keep the same type of Font for each assignment that will make your work more serious. and try to put some pictures or some animation stuff to make your blog more interesting, besides that good job.

Javier Torres

http://fraticelliricardomh2blog.blogspot.com/